Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Sorry I Broke Your Nose

When I first read this poem, I said to myself, "Who on this green earth keeps plums in an ice box?" After wondering about that for a solid thirty seconds, I decided to finally analysis the poem.  From what I can gather the this person ate something that wasn't his, but he/she said that it felt sorry for eating it. however we all know he/she doesn't feel sorry because its was some delicious sweet food that was sitting there asking to be eaten by someone. Who is in the poem? Simple question, it obvious to people in some type of relationship, either marriage, or are dating. The whole meaning of the poem is to apologize for something that you really don't feel sorry about doing in the first place.

Here is my swing at this type of poem

You probably
should of
been looking

when i
swung the
bat

now your
nose
is broken

I'm sorry
i didn't
see you
back there

then again
why where
you
on the
field

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