So when I read this poem, I cannot help but think of a couple. This dude is waking up early for work. He sees the plums. He knows his wife bought them for herself for breakfast. But, this insensitive husband decides to take her plums, knowing that she will be mad seeing her plums gone. So, he decides to leave her a note. He asks for forgiveness and then describes the plums as "sweet" and "cold" (kind of like his wife's heart for not buying him plums too).
Volleyball and Oreos by me
I have eaten
the oreos
that were in
the package
right before
I got in the car
to go
to volleyball
look away
as I throw up
on this
court so clean
love the poem you made!!!!
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