Friday, December 16, 2016

yum plums (late)

I think it is a older man talking to his daughter that he lives with, I would say that they have a good relationship good enough for him to take her food. I feel like the plums don't really have that much significance to the poem but the adjectives do by telling the daughter how good they where.



Here's Mine:


I have heard

the songs
that you play
at the church

some which
you have written
others that you have not
all are good

I wish to write
and sing
as you do





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